Feedback

When returning back from half term, we gathered helpful feedback from two of our teachers since we put a rough edit together with our footage, we only ended up using less than half of the footage that we talk as when looking at it on a clearer desktop we found noticeable errors, for example shadows. Our group has took in our teacher's feedback and ways to improve well and we will be developing our work using their ideas.

Emily: Emily suggested for us to change the first half of our title sequence as there are contrasting paces in our title sequence, she also thought that the first half of the characters getting ready were poorly shot lighting wise so our group has decided to reshoot our shots of the two characters getting ready. Emily was also keen of the music that our group selected together and thinks it works well with the thriller genre and the 'chasing / following' feel we are going for in the title sequence. She also suggested where we should place our voiceover and some extra shots we should add.

Sinead: Sinead didn't find a problem as much with the pace of our title sequence as a whole but still thinks we should reshoot some of our footage which we have now understood is understandable considering the quality and lighting change throughout the title sequence. Sinead also approved of the music choice. Sinead also suggested for the two characters having strong differences between them so the audience doesn't get too confused with what is happening.

Overall, I feel as if the feedback was helpful and we need what we need to do in order to improve our work.